I'm mulling a couple versions of my blurb. Any thoughts? Readers: does one grab you?
Page turning suspense, titillating threat of romance—Bea Ruud’s escape from victim-self-pity is in the toilet and she’s starting over, with a titanium hip, her running and skydiving days over. Her stalker remains a threat. Family skeletons loom with her uncle mulling a run for governor—until he disappears, with Bea’s father. Scandal, international intrigue, and armed men threaten the family. Amid the chaos, she has gentlemen showing interest in her, something she’s not accustomed to. Her life a shambles, the timing could be better.
Bea Ruud, accomplished athlete, attorney-turned-photographer, rape and kidnap survivor, is starting over with a titanium hip and knee, her running and skydiving days history. Her famous family’s shadow looms darker than ever—under her parent’s care, under the same roof. Her uncle’s life explodes in scandal and intrigue, then he disappears, with Bea’s father. Gunmen threaten the family. With all the chaos, four men appear captured by Bea’s charms. They must be crazy. She’s no bubbly personality.