Tuesday, November 10, 2015

Favorite Passage

Passage from my Work In Process.

I must have zoned out because we were no longer on I-95. I assumed we neared the hotel. That was good. Exhaustion slapped me left then right, then kicked me in the backend. A shower, bed, a couple chapters of my current book, was all I wanted. But other questions about Cummings’ issues kept flipping my brain like a burger patty. 


6 comments:

  1. I like! Has a LONGMIRE feel to it.

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  2. Backend? Interesting term...
    Keep writing. Please.

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  3. Haha, yesss, flipping through his/her mind like a burger patty. ;o) Keep up the good work!

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  4. Very colorful and descriptive, Mac.

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  5. Like that "burger patty!"

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