Friday, January 16, 2015

Favorite Passage

I haven't posted a favorite passage in a while. I'll be republishing REVENIR in a week or so. It will be much better. Writing tighter. Voice much sharper. I'm very excited.

Unwilled, my incisors extended. I felt as though I stood in the sun. I shook. I drew back and plunged into his throat, pressing my teeth into him, reveling in the blood rushing through his veins. I tasted him. Shivered at the humanity, the life that resonated within him.


6 comments:

  1. Loving especially the last line here.

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  2. That made me cringe- which is totally what you were aiming for, right?

    You're right. That's very well done!

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  3. Ah, I can taste the blood. Nice.

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  4. Nasty pieces of work, lol.

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  5. And how long will that life continue to resonate? I can see I am going to have to read it. My weak-willed self will succumb to the temptation you have waved at me...

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  6. Oh my! That does excite me too.
    MB

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