Thursday, August 16, 2012

Favorite Passage--Personification and Description

The sun was high enough to illuminate deep within the abyss. As Allison slithered northward, she opened herself up in a breathtaking show. The raw, exposed minerals of the land looked more like a smeared artist's palette. Every hue glared under the penetrating rays. Narrow bands of red and white sandstone made surreal swirls, as though demonstrating nature had a sense of humor, layers cutting sharp grimaces across her face.

Have a great week.

-R. Mac Wheeler
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  1. Nice personification of the earth :-)

  2. Hi Mac - thank you for leaving your suggestions on my blog. I really like The Warrior's Heart :-)