Friday, April 6, 2012

Feedback, Anyone? This 1 is more character driven fitting the novel

 

The owners of a technology that can place thoughts into a man's mind across space are worth meeting. Otherwise the rogue solar system may never have been discovered. 

Seventeen explorers hurl toward the edge of the universe to investigate if sentient life truly exists where a Navy pilot is drawn by a mental impression. The two-year mission will test the team, each with dreams and hopes, relationships and baggage, lives placed on hold. Isolation and the physics of accelerating the speed of light every quarter of a second will punish them. The greed of others seeking to rape the new world of its resources may strand them megaparsecs from home, or force them to make the ultimate sacrifice.  

FIRST CONTACT is the third volume of the PERSONA KORY MAE series. 

Read a three chapter excerpt here.
-R. Mac Wheeler
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2 comments:

  1. I like it from where you say seventeen etc. It sounds more proactive than the other one.

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  2. I agree. I think that second paragraph by itself is good. Very intriguing. But is there supposed to be a "to" after "accelerating"?

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