Wednesday, September 7, 2011

Today's (My) Favorite Passage

After a moment her eyes did that twitch like they failed to focus any longer. Her emotions swelled in a fashion that implied she might cry. Not something he'd expect from an ogre. They seemed tougher than the garden variety oak. The image of Ike pulling an arrow from his own back flashed through his mind. Stinking visions.

Regards,
Mac
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6 comments:

  1. I wish there was more of this. I need more context.

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  2. You'll just have to beta Warlock Apprentice, then.

    ;O)

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  3. Making my eighth edit pass over the manuscript. Eager to start the querying process.

    It is of course a very intriguing novel. ;O)

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  4. That's a nice intriguing little paragraph.

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  5. I know, I'm a broken record...always looking for beta readers. I'm screaming to finish this edit. I owe two fellow writers edits. Not enuf hours in the day...huh?

    -- Mac

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