Multi-genre author of flawed characters with a lot of baggage, in situations beyond their wildest expectations.
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It can be hard to find the balance between showing and telling. I have seen stories that show too much of what should be told. I think you've got it right here.
Nicely put together.
Like the schematic. May link to it.