Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Verb-Noun Tags

You would never say, "Going I'm to the store. Need I coffee and bread." Even Yoda would know better. So why do I come across so many writers that think it is cool to use, "said she"? It blows my mind. If you're writing for a five year old, cool. Go for it. But if you want your tag to disappear, as most of us do, don't do that!

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Regards,
Mac

3 comments:

  1. Time for writers to realize we no long get paid by the word like Dickens who used ten words where two would do.

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  2. Guilty! I've used this tag before. However, I don't over do it. I guess I used it to vary the rhythm of the dialogue and avoid repetition, that's all. Not trying to be "different or cool," just trying to make it work in my dialogue.

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  3. Never seen it done, but I can see how it would make you look back and say "What?"

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