Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Simplifying Attribution

"I'll do what I can," Bick said. He pinched his eyes together. "Never heard a troll asking for nothing. This ought to be good."

"I'll do what I can." Bick pinched his eyes together. "Never heard a troll asking for nothing. This ought to be good."

Eliminate unnecessary attribution. You typically only need either the tag, or the direction. Not both.

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Mac
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