Monday, August 16, 2010

Cutting the Flab

Her gauzy wings fluttered in anticipation./RUE…resist the urge to explain.

The surrounding context explained her anticipation to this reader.

When asking the writer permission to use this passage: Go ahead, but I still like it. :) To me, it’s a description, not an explanation.


A cat can swish its tail in annoyance, or it can swish it because it's listening to music. It makes a difference.

Write Every Day!

Regards, Mac
http://home.roadrunner.com/~macwheeler/

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