Monday, June 7, 2010

RUE – Resist the Urge to Explain

When I was seventeen and told the joke about the two old Texans standing on the bridge, the punchline (both) wooshed over my head. Yeah, and I haven't gotten any swifter. The point is, it's sometimes tough for the writer to figure out when you haven't explained enough, and vice versa. Browne and King in Self-Editing For Fiction Writers point out four dangers of explaining.
  • Condescending
  • Redundant
  • Muddles writing
  • Interrupts flow
These are obviously things (like adverbs) you want to avoid, so it may be best to err on the conservative. Leverage your local critique group. Feedback is essential.

Write Every Day!

Regards,
Mac

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