Wednesday, June 16, 2010

I Liked This Passage

I'm working on my current YA paranormal and this paragraph just erupted on my screen, and I loved it. Thought I would share it.

In the back, Zach and Nathan talked about on-line gaming. Adam had his left hand on the back of the front seat. He leaned forward, his thumb flipping the safety of his cannon on and off. A vampire was asking me about my hair. I was inside some Tim Burton dreamscape.

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Regards,
Mac

2 comments:

  1. A vampire was asking me about my hair.

    I know this is totally out of context, but you're right. Awesome paragraph.

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  2. I love this paragraph--especially that last line.

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